#6 essay.

 10 days have passed after the first report about their scandal. People are gradually getting over from the shock as Seo address himself to the public in person. At the same time, Lee withdrew the case against Seo. Popular opinion has tilted in favor of the Seo’s position because they casted doubt on her purpose of the suit. Since she was his big fan from a child, she still wanted for him to concern over her. Regarding this topic, the writer argues that this scandal is not only his fault but hers. However, I think Seo is the only person who deserves to be criticized. My opinion originates from 2 reasons to contradict the essay #5.

The essay contends that Seo didn’t have any choice except for hiding his bride to protect her because of his fame and influence to the public. I understand his circumstance that his fame hindered to their marriage announcement. However, he didn’t have to reveal who his bride is. He might be able to just say that “I got married.” Not only that, but the couple was not in Korea, they were living in America right after the announcement of his retirement. It is hard to understand the writer’s concern that she could be exposed to a lot of danger.

What is more, the writer goes on to say that their secret life could be in agreement as she enjoyed her life with his financial power. Some people could agree with this argument. However, is it okay for you to change the stigma of divorce and getting wealth for 3 years? Moreover, she was only 18-year-old girl when they married without parents’ approval. Even though there was an agreement, it might be a fatal mistake of youth. I think Seo, who was old enough to make a serious decision, should have had a cool-headed assessment of the situation.

Lastly, for those 2 reasons which I stated above, I maintain that Lee is just a victim of this tragedy. Seo could have chosen other ways to get the public’s blessing with quiet life and she was too young to make a serious decision like her marriage. Hence, I believe she is not guilty.

#5 Seo taiji & Lee Jiah

Provided that you have to choose between exposed personal life and private life, what is your choice? Seo Taiji, the most influential musician in Korea, picked the latter instead of setting his marriage with famous actress E Jiah abroad for 14 years. They even are in the process of filing for divorce approximately for 3 years. After this serious scandal popped up abruptly, publics have fall into chaos. Considering the public opinion on the internet, most people blame Seo only criticizing that he should not have made his fiancé as a victim of his picture-perfect life. My view, however, is that we should not blame only him. My view stems from the fact that he didn’t have any choice except for hiding and Lee is to blame for this secret as well.

 To begin with, it is well known fact that Seo is called the president of Korean culture for nearly two decades. Most teenagers who have lived in 90’s immensely affected by his music, fashion and especially spirit of resistance. All mass media focuses on his daily life finding a handle for gossip. He might think that he is carrying the weight of the world on his shoulders. It would be difficult him to reveal his love life. Also, one thing we should not miss is that he must want to protect Lee from the mass media by giving a shelter to her.

Moreover, it is possible that Lee’s life behind Seo could be in agreement. Actually, Lee took too many advantages of his strong influence on the entertainment world. She has gained so easily a starring role in many soap operas even though she was just a new actress. Not only that, but she learned everything she want such as horse riding, playing a guitar, fashion design, web design and so on. I don’t think she could do that without his support.

In conclusion, many people say that he is a selfish man. However, I think it is not true because he has no choice but hiding his marriage and it is not only his fault but his wife’s. I do not think he doesn’t have any blunder. It is obvious that he deceived us all. But, it is necessary that we stay calm.

4th essay

  I was on my way to back home hastily putting up an umbrella. It was dim, dark and drizzling night. As it was almost midnight, I was little bit nervous. Nowadays the number of crimes is increasing rapidly. So I was always worrying about this dangerous society. 

  At that time, I felt someone was behind me in a distance and I felt like that the person follow me like a shadow. I suddenly got frightened, I threw away my umbrella and started running toward home. The tall man was running after me as well. I eventually was caught and trembled for fear like a condemned prisoner.

  Then, the man folded his umbrella. He was my younger brother! I breathed a sigh of relief with anger ironically. Finally, he was kicked in the shin and back home with me.

  From this experience, I learned that sometimes my suspicion could be wrong. However, I will never stop staying alert to live in this unsafe world.